crescent

I remember reading this awhile ago, and you've definitely added some new content. I still don't really understand why they're so freaked out by the concept of public school though. ...

What I really like about this poem is the contrasting points of view. It makes me think of all the lies we tell people and how greatly our ideas differ ...

I had gotten one of the remote control flying helicopters for Christmas that year, and was intent on trying it out. There shouldn't be a comma here. "What have we ...

Dear Modly ones, What happened to review day? I didn't see one for November. Did I miss it or have Review Days become discontinued? -Crescent

Like stargazer, I'm not a poetry expert. I think it's okay to spell things out for the reader though, but you have cliche wording. Like they used to Like I ...

Your delicate little head was meant to rest tenderly on my flesh, protected from the cold of this world. But I forgot how cold can seep, even into the tiniest ...

Hi. First off, I'd suggest you consider your audience. Are you writing for adults or teens/young adults? This will shape the way you write things. If you're targeting young adults, ...

I kind of gave up on NaNo... :/ I'm over 3000 words behind and I'm mad at my novel... I just remembered how much I hate various POVs, and somehow ...

Hi Kaitemay. I don't understand what you are trying to say. You may want to consider working on your grammar and spelling. On YWS, we use proper grammar, spelling and ...

I'm currently writing a novel and one of my MCs is an avid video gamer. Unfortunately, I know next to nothing about video games and which ones a typical adolescent ...

I really like the contour of the image. The pumpkin has a mystifying, spooky look. I think you can work on the shading and perhaps darken the colours a bit. ...

But just because failure teaches you things, it doesn’t mean you should try to fail. It means that if you do fail, it’s okay, because you learned something, and it ...

I'm kind of doing NaNo. I don't trust myself to get started though... But the more I think about the more appealing it gets. To have my own finished manuscript ...

Hello. The rhyme scheme seemed a bit forced at times. The way it was structured wasn't very symmetrical. Sometimes you had the abab, aaaa, abbb, etc. You write well with ...

I"ll think about it. Like Jas, I may need some sleep. How long does the workshop last?