crescent

I agree with Lava. I don't know if you've read, heard, or seen twilight before, but your story is almost exactly like it. The "Edward" just looks different, more like ...

P.S. I forgot to say this Aushy, job well done. :) Love you!

Okay, the first thing I have to say is your story was amazing. The second thing I have to say is there were some confusing areas in your story, particularly ...

Your reviews are all so helpful. :) Thank you for taking your time to read Crescents :)

I don't really know what to say. I'm not exactly into this type of literature so I might be a bad critic. I think I might speak/write in a different ...

Hello. I just got started here on January 14, 2010. I'm not exactly sure what I'm supposed to write here. Introductions can be challenging. I'll just start with the fact ...

Lol brittney but my name is not Phoebe my name is Sky... ;)

PROLOGUE Why can’t most humans see us? It’s because our bodies are made of a substance that looks very water-like, invisible to the human eye, in most cases. We can ...

Good job Britt :) . You just need to edit it a bit like all ther other people suggested. It's kind of differet than how you described to me earlier ...

That was such a sad story... It's so sweet. You just have to change some of the tenses, like mizz-iceberg said.