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Warning: I am going to rewrite this chapter so please don't read it if you don't want me to mess with your sanity. “No,” Stella screamed, “You don’t get it ...

I liked it too. It rythmed well. Tell your friend to keep on writing and to make a yws.

Sorry about making it too fast... I got too excited. Maybe I should make this piece into a novel because it doesn't seem like something easy to explain in a ...

Hello Rocki!!! Okay, I really liked the idea. You have quite some talent. I can't wait to read more. There are quite a few grammatical errors though. I know we ...

I thought it was well written too. I can't wait for your next chapter to come out! :)

Tears slid down the girl’s flushed cheeks as her slender fingers typed the words, I have a confession to make. I lied to you all this time. I’m really 65. ...

Hello. Congrats! It's day two and you've already posted your first piece! :) I like it so far too. I couldn't find any errors either except I thought you could ...

Hi. My name is... Well I haven't decided my name yet, but I will be your reviewer and pretend that I don't know you. :wink: So anyways, I liked this ...

Okay, I thought that was well-written. I liked it but it was kind of creepy. I agree with Dreamy, some parts are not exactly realistic. Girls don't really push guys ...

I liked it too. It was very imaginative and I'll definitely be looking forward to when you post your newer work.

I like it a ton too. It's pretty realistic except for the fact that Charlotte and Henry shake hands. Most teens don't do that unless it's with an adult. Also, ...

Wow. that was amazing. :) I can't wait to see what comes next. Why did he tell her to let go and fall off the building? PM me when the ...

I agree with the other posts. You need to decide which tense you want to use, present or past. You also need to make Lyndon sound more like a kid. ...

Chapter 2 I laid wide awake. The sea was pitch black now, excluding the dome of fire the Pyros cast out of their fingertips, they were skilled enough that they ...

I like it a lot. It left me begging for more. It's really good.