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P.S How did they hang all of those people within a matter of hours?

:lol: Okay, so I read this chapter late at night then I had a dream about it but it was in modern times... The Chapter was awesome as usual :) ...

Lol, ttt, I can't fix it on a word document because it doesn't copy the formatting. I wrote this on word and the italics for all the convos and stuff ...

can you make me one? :D

It was very dramatic like Anchees said. I liked it. You might want to add a little bit more to the story, make it longer possibly. His teeth that she ...

Can I be an evil waif in denial? Like one who is struggling between breaking the peace and the fight for power. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do ...

Hi, I know you would like me to make the chat in italics, it just takes really long though. Like one hour long... I write it on Microsoft Word for ...

Hi. I read the story that goes before this one. I'd love to love this your series, but I have no idea what is going on. Why did Zane want ...

Hi. It's me again. I like the idea. Romance and mermaids. I don't want to be harsh, but here are some of the nitpicks I found. I'm not sure if ...

I like it too, especially the end of the chapter. It leaves the reader at a cliff hanger. Borntobeawriter, tanya, seems to have caught everything. :) Off to the next ...

I really liked your piece. I agree with the previous people though, you need to smooth out the edges a bit to make it run more smoothly. I'm just curious, ...

Okay, I know a couple of you have read messages. This is a bit different from the original. Originally, it was supposed to be a short story, but now, it's ...

Lol, I'm not making it into a vampire, no mythical creatures in this story. Sorry about posting this chapter. I realised (haha, I'm using the Brittish spelling) that it doesn't ...

Hello Classy. First off, I'd like to say I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was interesting. Be confident of yourself, it was excellent and well thought out. Sencondly, I ...

I would like you to kill "Millie". I want her to stick her hand in a jammed blender... (you get what happens to the hand) then get sent to the ...