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Re: Thread of L.Poems
Hi Pacific. Here's my opinion. It seems like each of your poems could be a tad bit longer. Extend the story. :) It'll be something beautiful. From my perspective, it ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: How do points work?
I know you get points when you review, but do you get more points when you write a really long review than whereas writing a super short review?
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: What if?
*Likes* It's featured again!!! Now you can't complain, Kim. :smt003 lol. I don't know how to review the poetry but I liked how the questions formed a story and how ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Fear the truth
Aww... That reminds me of me... Except for the fact that I don't write as awesome poetry and my poetry format is all messed up. I'm sorry that you feel ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Monster Love
This one gave me chills. Is the girl a vampire? It was really good too. I know why I'm down here , I know what I've done, but baby your ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Teenage Torment
I liked this poem too. I'm sensing this mysterious element in your poetry. It makes me ponder on the meaning. (It's a complement. :) ) My favourite lines were It ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Fear the truth
Wow! That was captivating. I read the poem a couple of times. Is it talking about a break up? (Just curious, not to pry or anything.) I really liked it. ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: say it already 8-3-1
I liked it. It had so much emotion in it, very desciptive. I can feel the frustration. 8 letters, 3 words, 1 meaning. I love the first line. I counted ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Then we kissed and time stopped for a minute. (second draft)
I love it. All I saw were the guy's hand was a little small in proportion to his head. It looks beautiful. I didn't even notice anything else until I ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: When you were almost mine...
Pretty green eyes that hypnotize, A smile that made me feel complete, A personality I’ll never forget, I’ll always remember the day we met, But the future has been foreseen, ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet a Twist in the Story
I love Romeo/Juliet rewrittings. I really hope you'll continue writing this. *Likes* I can't wait to see who Romeo's other love is and how this will all turn out. Can ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Butterfly Kiss
Its so pretty. I really liked it. Welcome to YWS by the way. I'm not exactly sure how to review poetry... Here's all I found. close so i can see ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Your Profile Picture
*Likes* :)
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Your Profile Picture
I don't know how to review poetry or even the different types of poetry, but I like this piece. It doesn't rhyme, but it's relatable and all poetry doesn't rhyme ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Be mine (chapter 1)
I liked it, but I got confused. Like how the girl was suddenly gone and when you described the friend but I really really really liked this piece. I haven't ...
Feb 27, 2010
