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Re: The Sunset.
Wow. That was really good, Ollie.
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Show Me
Aww... that's how I feel too but it's different... It's really emotional (your poem). I think you got the formatting right, but I wouldn't know... Lol. I liked it :) ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Dark Horror: Prologue & Chapter One
I wrote this a year ago, and quit. It's still here if you want to read it, but I've created a slightly different world with the same characters. Here's the ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Black Rose-ch.1
GAWH!!!! GoldenQuill got here before me :( I wanted to point at things :smt003 There may be repeats ;) It was good writing but it would be even better if ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: TimeKeeper
Hi Classy!!! :smt003 I shall be your first reviewer for TimeKeeper. When I first saw the title I thought it'd be something sci-fi with time traveling and stuff. You nearly ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Sick Obsession
:)
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Fists Clutched with Hurt
Personally, I think that sometimes people do things that are irrational. Sometimes words can stimulate things to happen. Like the messages in music tend to affect us. I do not ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Fists Clutched with Hurt
WARNING: THINGS THAT HAPPEN IN THE POEM ARE NOT MEANT FOR YOU TO DO IN REAL LIFE!!! DO NOT GO OUT MURDERING PEOPLE WHO HAVE HURT YOU!!! Tears ran down ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: I can't do it, I can't move on
I like your lyrics/poem. Just remember to capitalize your "I"'s when you write. I almost cried after I read this poem. Though I've never been in a relationship before, this ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Death
It sounds like you're going though a tough time. Comments: Death can be really depressing. People die everyday like you said, even people like unborn babies. Did you know 3500 ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: My Alice
*Likes*. This was really interesting. You showed me a whole other perspective of Alice in Wonderland. Maybe Alice really just made this all up because she didn't want to face ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: 8th Grade bites (literally)
Hi. My name is Crescent. I shall be possibly your first reviewer for this piece. :) I liked the plot but the errors were a bit distracting. You kept on ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Scavengers (Scene Seven of Ten)
This isn't making much sense to me, but it's not scaring me either... People with guns. I think you should of started me off with the first scene... What's Tripolis ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: But That Couldn't Be Helped. It Never Could.
I liked this one. It was short but it portrayed a huge amount of emotion, story, life, in a couple of paragraphs. It was mysterious and intriguing. I just found ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Two-sided Echoes of Love
Your words linger in my head, Echoing all the time, Fears and dreams beleaguer me. “I love you.” “I love you.” Nightmarish thoughts versus the calming sea, A threat unseen, ...
Mar 9, 2010
