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Re: Get a Review from This Guy! Yeah, that's right. Me!
Done and done.
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Blood on my hands(edited)
Hello. Because most of the reviews on here are grammar related, I'm going to primarily focus on content. The interrogator threw the papers down on the table. I looked down ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Creative Writing College Classes
I'm thinking about taking a Creative Writing Class at a college. Have any of you taken one before? How did you like the whole experience? Thanks, Crescent
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Falling in Love.....
I've struggled with the same issue writing, as I too, have not been in a relationship before. But, like peanutgallery says, you gain experience by experiencing. If you like this ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: NaNo Therapy Clinic
Use Control find, replace and then switch all of the names to one of them so you'll be less confused. You could always keep a list of characters on a ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: What genres do you write in?
I once began writing a really creepy elf novel (in the middle of the night when it was cold and eerie), but the darkness of the novel started scaring me, ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Your Green Hoodie
What you've done with this is really cute. This is an adorable short story. I like how you personalized the story, how you added the small details like the paint ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Miss you
Sometimes my mind doesn't comprehend what your sayin' when the day ends And I just wanna go to sleep This seems to be a common error these days... "Your" and ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
Felt
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
True. I do! I love it so much! :) I predominantly read books in the fantasy genre. The cat below me has a terribly severe fear of slipping on wet ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Euthanasia.
I like how this story was written with some final thoughts from the MC in the beginning and the short but impacting plot-line. However there were two things that confused ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Audy's Star Fund! - Donate your Poetry
I'd be really happy to have a review on this piece of poetry.
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Turning into Infinity
Hi, Ancient. Review as requested. I had to read this a couple of times to devise an interpretation as to what your prose meant, and here’s what I came up ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Get a Review from This Guy! Yeah, that's right. Me!
Hello. I am Crescent, the This Guy referred to in the title. I often waste my time doing pointless things and being saddened by my lack of YWS notifications. So, ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: A Merry Christmas
I really don't like how the second stanza is formatted either, but I like most of the poem. We sit on the porch, Sipping the thick, Steaming cocoa, Laughter filling ...
Nov 14, 2011
