crescent

Hey. You have good writing skills, but no offense or anything, this sounds almost exactly like twilight. There are so many parallels. The MC is pale skinned and so is ...

How did the mods become mods? One mod said, "You have to sell your soul to Nate. He keeps them in jam jars." This storybook is simple. We just build ...

It's very twilight-ish. I liked how this story rhymed. It was very cool. -Crescent

Hi NewHero. It's so pretty. I really like your poems. There's just a few nitpicks. We'll fly On, my love You don't need to capitalize "On". 'Cause President's can't do ...

This was really pretty. :) *likes* -Crescent

Hi Olli. This was a nice piece. *likes* I was eleven when I was murdered. Murdered by a six year old girl who smiled brightly when I first met her. ...

Pret-ty... :) Can't wait to see more!!!

Hey!!! I really really like this. I'll be back later to review :)

Hi. I really liked this piece. It's so true!!! I made a few formatting changes. L ove is like medicine , (it) makes you feel better or worse . I ...

Hi Howler. I like the message in this poem. People definitely shouldn't care what others think and be themselves. My words couldn't be less relevent to them, so they think ...

That's so cool. I would of never known it was a bench. Benches look way better that way. :) *likes* Thanks for showing me a new perspective on how to ...

Hi. This was an interesting subject. It's very unique. This poem confused me a little though. I've played chess before, but I couldn't really figure out who "I" is. I ...

Rocky!!! That was very pretty. :) *likes*

:) Your poem made me smile. Salty is awesome.

Hi. I hope everything's getting better. I just tweaked the formatting a little. It's the message and feeling that counts and you portrayed the feeling well. What happened ? I ...