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Re: Summer
It was fine. You weren't wandering. Yeah, I guess that's how things tend to be. I moved when I was nine, so I totally get what it's like. People are ...
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Re: My first drawing
The shading is very nicely done. I can't wait to see a clearer pic! I'd suggest you draw on printer paper next time though or unlined paper. -Crescent
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Re: simple harmonic motion
I get it. It's about a clock, right? Nevermind, I don't get it. I haven't learned physics yet :( I'll look at it again in a couple of years. :) ...
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Re: Silly Little Cat
Lol. I can see this as a children's book. Little children would adore it. :) The pictures would be so cute. You grew wings overnight, a nd now you think ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Mary-Sue: A life
:) Lol. I was wondering why the name Mary-Sue sounded so familiar at first. Yeah, that's pretty much how a lot of stories go. Flawless chracters achieving everything and ending ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Our Room
Hi. You must continue writing this. I don't really know what's going on, what the situation is between the couple. Why are they acting the way they are? What is ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Samantha
I love the eye. I agree with the other people. The nose is a bit funky. I like how it fades out and the half face. Good work Durrie. I'm ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: My First Photos! :}
Nice pics. Yeah, you should definitely keep photographing. -Cressy :)
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Help
It seems a bit busy. I think it'd look really nice though. I envisioned it with the blue and grey. For the lighting, go outside at night and look at ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: More than Flower
Hi. You should continue on this poem. Descibe more. Why does it look magical and mysterious? What colour is this flower? In the beginning, you write "In that little burst ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Smells of the Ocean
Hi Aristotle. Lovely imagery. You should totally continue on this. It flows nicely. Nitpick: I lay down on my blanket, And I think about these things, That I smell. I ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: A phoenix reborn.
Hey Spike. I like the idea, but I was a bit confused with the first paragraph/stanza or whatever it's called. I like how it was written, it was truly powerful, ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: My TenYo Poem- Please Help Me!!!
I wrote two with the same topic, but I don't know which is better or if they should be meshed together. Tell me what you think. Tenyo is my fishy ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Butterfly, Fly
It was really pretty. It made me think of monarch butterflys. *likes* thank you for writing this. It made my day. -Crescent
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: The Neon Sign
*likes*
Apr 16, 2010
