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Re: Legend of Zelda: Wings of Darkness (Revised!)
Hey Gladius. EEEP!!! O.o I think I reviewed a comment by accident... I'll take a look at it again later. (Don't know much about Legend of Zelda except that it's ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Recent works
D: :'( My new novel didn't show up and I was just posting the first chapter...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: A Billet-doux
Hey. I like the title to your poem. There was a contradiction. You said that the man was there with you in bed, but then all of the sudden you ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Recent works
Is there a rule that you can only have one of your recent works in the recent works section? Like if you post two with only a few minutes apart, ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: couture no more
I don't really understand the poem either. Maybe you can incorporate what you just told us into the poem? -Crescent
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Hi Newbie here :)
Welcome. Do you like butterscotch? What genre do you like most? Yes, do go to the chat room. It's fun. :) -Crescent
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Stating the obvious: I'm new. ;)
Ooo... You like the Uglies Series :) Me too. It was sad that Zane died though. Before I forget, Welcome to YWS!!! I hope you like it here. The people ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Zero to Hero
Haha. Lol. Nice fictional news report. -Crescent
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: The Bullet Grazed Her Heart pt.1
Hey. *tear drops from eye* What happened that made Zane suddenly dump her after a two year relationship? Loveless, please reveal his secret or whatever. She just smiled is all, ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: When I Dream
*nods* what she said. You could continue on the pretty imagery. -Crescent
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: She Laid Dead in My Arms
I could hear each heartbeat grow fainter and as the time dragged on, the rhythm grew slower till it was silent. Dead. Her body lay in my hands. “Why?” I ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: I'd lie
I like it. You did a good job with it. It sounds believable, like the chracter's real, as if all of this really happened. It's pretty. Maybe you should do ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Daughter of Snow White
The mirror lay on the wall. It’s been unused for several years now. Dust cakes its glass surface. No one’s been here, it’s gotten lonely. The Queen was dead now; ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Why?
I like the questions. I get how you're feeling through them. You're talking about depression and how you can't get your special someone, right? I like the part about the ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Dollhouse [Ch. 1]
It's a nice read. I'm still wondering what happened and what she is despite the fact the title is "dollhouse" so I'm assuming she's a doll? I like your writing ...
Apr 17, 2010
