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Re: You're killing me, baby.
For Health class I had to make an anti-smoking ad and I thought mine turned out pretty awesome and you might enjoy it. xP Smoke resized.jpg
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Cow!
I like how the cow's head pops out. He/she looks very cute. It reminded me "the dog". The black and white effect was very cool.
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Bound by Cold
These were really beautiful. Not to sound rude or anything, but what were they pictures of? I live in a warm climate so I've never seen anything like this really ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Cry
This is good. The title drew me in and the poem was amazing. Everyone else already pretty much covered all the grammar stuff. I don't really grasp the meaning of ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Cry
This is good. The title drew me in and the poem was amazing. Everyone else already pretty much covered all the grammar stuff. I don't really grasp the meaning of ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Always and Forever
I liked it. It was brilliant. Clever. And it had a unique twist to it that I totally wasn't expecting.
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Book Self
I really like it, especially the titles of the pages the books were turned to. Was that coincidental or intended? It was beautiful. :)
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Lost&Found: Chapter 8: Dog-eared Pages
Hi Tenyo. :) I just love Lost & Found. I don't know what it is about it,from the style of writing you use to the actual content itself. Allow me ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: LIAR
Hi there. I liked how you described liars. It was an interesting poem to read. I agree with Ray though. You talk about "they" in your poem so you may ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Lost & Found: Chapter 6: Nausia
Henri got lost now too? Poor Henri wandering around. This is really good. :) I want more now. You better post more soon!!! ...or I'll be a sad panda.
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Lost & Found: Chapter 5: ABC all over again
Loving it, Tenyo. :) Tiny whispers drifted across the classroom and she knew they where all about her. Comma after "classroom" and "where" should be "were". She was given a ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Lost&Found: Chapter 4: Christmas Lights
Wow. I really like this chapter. It's nice. The dialogue is a bit hard to follow though. Sometimes you talk about another chracter's actions when a different chracter is speaking, ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Lost&Found: Chapter 4: Christmas Lights
I cancelled all my social plans over Christmas in order to look after Henri, and made up an excuse about spending time with distant relatives (which wasn’t completely untrue. That ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Poof -- to Sare
Awww... Durrie :) It's so good!!! It looks so pretty. The cat looks so realistic, it's like I can reach out and pet it. Keep on drawing!!! -Cressy
May 19, 2010 -
Re: I can hold a rainbow.
It's so shiny and pretty. :P
May 17, 2010
