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That looks pretty cool, Leth.

I used to have a few YWS friends on fb... but then they unfriended me...

HarperCollins merged Inkpop with Figment at the beginning of this month. It quite saddens me because although I was just a shadow on both sites, I found Inkpop to have ...

Dexter: My mouth foamed with white saliva, the liquid slowly trickling down my jaw. I was so thirsty even my normal blood intakes couldn’t quench my thirst. There has never ...

I've done a rewrite of this piece with (hopefully) increased characterization and clarity. Here's the url: This is for a contest on figment. Reviews would deeply be appreciated. I didn’t ...

Thank you for posting this. I would *like* this, but with the like button gone and everything... *goes to feed some ducks*

I like the bit of foreshadowing you used at the beginning of this prose. At my second glance, it provides deeper meaning, and I understand why Charity is so cautious ...

I don't know about everyone else, but I'm kind of anxious and freaked out about change... But it'll be exciting to see the glitching cease, so I can have YWS ...

My Sweet ________, Fine. I’m done fighting it. I can’t just shove it back and wait for something to happen. I’m done pretending that you’re just my best friend. Because ...

Before I finish , I strictly told Marcus Wilson to stop singing anymore because he had a dreadful voice and I totally hated it. *finished-you have been writing this whole ...

Hello. The other YWSers have provided you with very insightful advice. I agree with Rachel about clarity. Some of your sentences are confusing, and I think it's fair to say ...

"I don't remember hiring a--- oh wait, one of our cameras is on the fritz, what should we do?" This line seems a bit out of place. The security guard ...

Desperately I struggle to shake myself from this trance that has consumed me, but its shackles are tight and I can no longer break free. Comma after "Desperately". You need ...

I like the cover image and the big KA-BOOM in the back. It gives it a somewhat eerie, mystifying feel to the novel. However, I'm not a fan at all ...

He's talking to you, to all of you on the 7 Train to Times Square at 6:37pm when the sky is a painting, maybe a Renoir impressionism one, with strokes ...