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  • General Fiction Novels Re: TRAPPERS

    GAHHHH!!! The random adjectives and words feel like odd pieces of a jigsaw puzzle trying to jam themselves into the picture. e.g. "It was murderous and animated."

    May 1, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello friends!

    Welcome Ankitjain! I'm Cressy/Crescent/whatever you want to call me. My science student teacher is from India and so is one of my friends. I'm also bilingual, but I don't speak ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Rockin' Tenyo!

    ^^^ If you click on the picture, it shows the whole picture.

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Marry Me

    Hi. I felt this was a bit rushed. I was a bit confused because I thought Rylee wanted to die or kill the MC at first. I found parts of ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Deleted

    This seems A LOT like "Zombieland", especially with the rules thing you have going on or have at least begun with. You may want to finish writing your piece before ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Rockin' Tenyo!

    Artist's Note located below: I was inspired by this awesome picture I drew it a lil' differently of course to meet my needs of my imaginary Tenyo because I don't ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Water Dragon with Rider

    Very cool. I'm getting slightly confused looking at the tips of the wings though and the lines at bottom part of the tail are a bit dark, causing it to ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Venom

    All I have to say is, "beautifully written".

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Forever And Always

    Personally, I feel this song is a bit cliche, which is okay unless you want to be completely original. The title is a Taylor Swift song title and some of ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Move on for Me

    I thought of Dear John when I read this. I like it too. xP It has a suprise twist at the end. I'd just like to point out that in ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Where is Fred?

    So this chat is the one before blue free chat before the old paid chat with the yellow background?

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Where is Fred?

    I haven't been totally active on YWS for a while and just noticed that Fred is gone from chat! :O Does anyone know what happened to the mysterious YWS robot?

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Once Bitten *once edited!*

    It was a surprising twist. I didn't expect Ellie to be a vampire and for the guy to be the victim at all. I think it's fine to have the ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: A Bird.

    I like the coloring. You're bird is so cute! I also like how you've included the Chinese character for luck as one of those stamp signature things. The only complaint ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Some of my photos.

    I like these pics too. xP They're quite interesting to look at. I especially like the ultraviolet quality of the pic of the clock. I think it's the blurry effect ...

    Apr 2, 2011


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