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Re: Are you writing a novel?
I don't know if I'm writing a novel. There's one sitting in my head, but honestly, whenever it's put down on paper I end up tearing it apart. Often times, ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: The Gods are Douchenozzles
You craft the story in a very distinct way, and it's an easy read. I like how you gave the "gods" funny names. I could see you turning this into ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Sacrifice
This is quite an interesting beginning to a novel. I like how action-packed it is. You write quite well, and you have very few grammatical errors. I do hope you ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: My first poem in months
I'm not one who is able to distinguish good poetry from bad poetry, but I really liked this. The words flowed smoothly in my head when I read them. You ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Return What's Mine
Your story is about a secretary in Fairyland borrowing a pencil. I wrote another short story for this topic, but didn't like it and so I rewrote and added complexity. ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Borrowing Is for Losers
Your story is about a secretary in Fairyland borrowing a pencil. I don't think I like my story... What are your thoughts? I stood there perplexed, uncertain of my whereabouts ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1
I like this a lot actually. Out of curiosity, why did you make this take place in the future though? I read the second chapter first and I can't wait ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: I drew alot for Raz
That's beautiful! It's so cuddly. I want one in my closet! :D How did you do this? Paint? -Cress
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: unkept secrets
Prolo gu e My name is Violet Ames, I' m seventeen years old and ever since the day I was made my world revolved around three words : caspers, whisperers, ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: The Essence of Nothing: A Series of Short Poems
My best friend wrote this and I fell in love with it. So I asked him if I could post it here. This is a series of short poems. I ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Strange submitting behavior
I've been attempting to submit a work for the past 10 minutes and it "general error" keeps on popping up. I think some of my points have been extracted too. ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Tough Times
Your poem confused me. Perhaps I don't know all the references. e.g. what the meaning of "is" is. Is it supposed to be symbolic, because you mention it again in ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Recents + peanut19 commission
My favorite pic is the winter girl one. For some reason, she seems less color-pencily and almost marker-ish. I love how you captured the expression of each of your characters ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Deaf
I like how you wrote your poem entirely in questions. :D It gives the reader some leeway and keeps them interested. Interaction with the reader is always good. It was ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: How'd you discover YWS?
It was around January last year when overheard two of my friends, Goldenquill and smileybritt36 talking about YWS in art class. So I promptly asked them what this "YWS" was. ...
May 7, 2011
