crescent

This story was a very sweet and touching one. I could imagine this as a children's book. Your charaterization of the child, Gabby, was very well done. I could hear ...

Hi. I'm Crescent. Welcome to YWS. Just some friendly advice: Don't get addicted to the chat room. You'll stop writing... Anyways, I hope you like it. If you ever need ...

My characters don't really visit me. Sometimes I imagine them lurking around in their world though and what they could be doing right now. A lot of people say their ...

I haven't read your novel, but I have to agree with confetti. You should definitely change the names. If I were a reader, I'd definitely feel paranoid at all times. ...

First off, I'd like to mention that I love the irony of your title. Very sarcastic. Being that this is the first chapter, I guess it's okay for it to ...

I apologize for the mediocre quality my camera. I used my itouch... Click the picture to see it all at once. IMG_0369[1].jpg pig.JPG pig 2.JPG

Hi Kyllorac. Could you please review this fantasy novel for me. I've written two chapters so far and could really use some insight. I need a harsh-ish review. Thanks. If ...

Link to Chapter 1: The sun is over my head at the moment; it’s been hours since the Buster started barking at me and I jumped out of the window ...

This is a pretty powerful piece you've got here. There is so much emotion and I can just feel the sadness. It was hard to see my father laying the ...

I like the graphics and color choices. It does seem very mysterious and secretive. The guy with a hoodie looks like a mobster, which is perfect because of the crime ...

The woods are a quiet sort of thing, easy to hide in… forever. But I can’t hide in them forever; I refuse to live in a shadow of a forgotten ...

This poem was quite interesting. The image your poem gives off is very romantic and I love your word choices. It's beautifully written. However, you made a few minor grammatical ...

Hi Aushy. :D I haven't kept up with Limitless, but I do like this flashback/memory. Your writing is very fluid and I quite enjoyed your choice in vocabulary. I didn't ...

It was very heartfelt and touching. The flow of the words was empowering and almost left me with tears. I commend you for your bravery in sharing with us and ...

I like the first two flower pictures and the swan. They're pretty focused and have a nice balance to them. The orchid on the other hand, has a lot of ...