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this is just a first draft, not even finished yet, please tell me what you think The gentle whisper of waves brushing past, the cold glow of the moon dimly ...

Dear Lord If i have to mess up someones life Please let it be mine

Dear Lord As I sit wrapped in sunshine the world around me bares itsself skin pleading to be kissed by the light of the day As I sit the cloud ...

Dear Lord Let today be like no other day like a light has been turned on and shown the way to our true selves like the first snow of winter ...

Beautiful!

a smile a laugh the kiss of sun one foot then another and another the path of the day streching before us wrapped in memories we walk on

hey I loved how you repeated, 'for a moment' it really built up the conflicting feelings of the narrator, maybe you could build up the tension a bit more before ...