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Re: The paths we take. Part 1
(will review later)
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: What is my Strength, That I Should Hope?
(reserve for reviewing)
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: When We Do Meet Again
(reserving to review)
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Magic Of The Plays
(reserved to review later)
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Moon,The Stars And The Sun!
The word "Space" is modern too. You should change that.
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Nightshade Chapter 6
Brushing aside a stray raven lock from her face, she settled some frazzled hairs, and strode out of her tent. Brushing aside a stray raven lock from her face and ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Book tiltes/names!
I like 5 and 4.
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Puppy Love
No, don't change the title. I think it is so cute. I think this story is so cute, the title fits it. You have a few spelling errors though but ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: A Most Confused Hat
I just want to point out that maybe this should be under Fan Fiction instead of General Fiction or it could be under Fantasy. I would say Fan Fiction.
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: The Definition of Hell
That was amazing. This was really good. The readers could feel the emotions. You really showed not told people the characters' feelings. I wonder what her found to release the ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Mommy
My goodness, I can totally feel the hate in this story. You showed us not told us the feelings. This is really good. I never thought of any but me ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: What is
I like this poem. It makes people think. Good job. Keeping writing.
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Deleted song 2
The content rating should be 18+.
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: The First Son - Chapter 2
"Mr. Mason, su hijo! Mira! Look what he did!" Wouldn't she say senor instead of Mr. if part of the sentence she is speaking in spanish.
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: The Senator
I think it is good but you could make it better.
Jun 22, 2011