creativemuse1

I like this story a lot. Actually, this is an awesome story. I can't wait to read what happens next. Today, my warriors, we hope that they have had a ...

Well, I want to say this is a good story. This is really good. I like this. I espeally like the beginning. I didn't know what you were talking about ...

Wow, well, this is really explicit. You have some grammer errors. I can tell you really hate this girl, but there are other words you could use to express your ...

Well, I think this is a good start. I like this story. I like the beginning. Attempting to see where the car had stopped, she was confronted with an inability ...

Well, first, that was a good story. I really enjoyed reading this. Symptoms began with a mild cough, then a mild itch, then a mild headache. I think you should ...

Well, I have to say, the ending and middle kept me interested. But I was confused about the beginning. I notice some grammer errors. I, also, notice you don't go ...

Well, Let me say I like this story. It kept me interested. The beginning threw me off but after awhile it got interesting. You could fix the beginning. At times, ...

INSANEASYLUM CARETAKER 1: (fat and overweight, male) 7. INSANEASYLUM CARETAKER 2: (skinny and boney, male) Well, I would like to begin to say that isn't spelled Insane Asylum? May be ...

Well, I would like to say, that was a good, teenage love story. She couldn't believe how he could say that. He was supposed to be her best friend. They've ...

First off, The beginning did not catch my attention. To tell the truth, the beginning was pretty bad. I think you should make it more interesting. Catch the reader's attenton. ...

I have to say, this is a good start. Jackson is still blaming himself for what he couldn't have prevented, am I correct? Well, I noticed some grammer mistakes in ...

Well, I would like to say that this was a pretty good idea. But in the beginning, I got a little confused and as the story progressed, I still was ...

The scent of soap and aftershave clung to his freshly bathed flesh as he stood in front of a length full mirror. It should be a full length mirror. He ...

I think this story is a good start. You need to fix the grammer in the story. "Yeah." I held her waist gently as she stood up grasping her ribs. ...

Oh, I forget to ask. When Sam died, I died with her too. Part of me felt torn, like a knife had been punched into my stomach, twisted. I never ...