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this poem is powerful and shows a large amount of determination. this also show how welll you give you character a voice, which makes you a great poet.

i just want to love you like no one ever done. is my favorite i can connect

so did the this person finally leaave the sun and dust ?? that was my only confusion but the poem is good and i was ingaged by the title

you twisted a fairy tale and created something good keep up the good work

wait why cant you trust her, I have to Read this from chapter 1. but there is so much detail, though there are grammer mistakes

there is so much feelings and pain in this poem, my eyes started to tear imagining a person feeling like this and at the same time is alone

I really wish i read the first part to understand, jumping into and reading the second chapter make me mad i didnt read from the start.The begining of this story ...

wow. you really have used great words and described through creative details about this woman. By your choice of words made it seem as though she has so much power ...

such a short poem but, it speak a thousand words which make it a great poem. continuing writing and keep up the good work.

Living in this world and seeing so many loved ones lost and noticing the wrongs I have made, really made me ask to god why would you leave me here? ...

wow you really explain alot of things that other authors do not or cannot explain,your poem has a good and intresting thought .

Im kind of confused if the first person is the parent..yet this poem show very strong emotions of a parent- child relationship many will agree

great poem and love the words you have choosen to use.

Angel Of Fate really show how a person has to develop their own voice as an artist

October's Own is my first piece, so I was in a rush to completing it and to seeing the response, this is a learning process and really cannot wait to ...