crazyhippo

Hey there! Sorry about my slowness in replying - I've been a bit busy lately. Anyway, I said that sometimes your writing can be a little bland, and what I ...

Thanks for your thoughts. It's clear now that this needs quite abit of work, but thanks to your comments I'm really up for tackling this challenge. Thanks :D

Thanks again for the comments. I'll definately look into rereading and rewriting these chapters. I must admit, rereading them myself, they do seem abit flat and lacking character. Thanks

No worries walker, i completely understand. Thanks for all the hints and critisism, i really want to make this novel the best it can be, so every helop is greatly ...

Thanks

Aaah! massive long review! Bit seriously, thank you so much Dreamwalker, I appreciate every bit of feedback I can get on my work. Thanks for pointing out quite a few ...

Thank you very much for the thorough review :D Chapter 5 and 6 are nearly ready for submission.

Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you liked it, and I'll be looking to fix the little errors that you have pointed out! :)

No problem. And thanks for reviewing my novel too! :D

Thanks for your thoughts HMASNameless. I do indeed need to work on my vocabulary abit, and I hope to be able to improve that side of it as I progress ...

Thanks for the review ElementalBlood, I can see what you mean by the repetative wording, I'll take a look at that. Also, the end of the chapter was quite difficult ...

I found the description of the suffering and pain your character experienced very interesting and it is very well written, it feels as if you are there in the room ...

Hey! I really like the opening, the way you describe life on the streets and survival. Not all gramatically correct, but of course that can easily be corrected. I like ...

Wow! The opening was very good, and the way you moved from scene to scene so easily had me really hooked, great stuff, i'll definately be following!