crazyhippo

Hey! I really like the opening, the way you describe life on the streets and survival. Not all gramatically correct, but of course that can easily be corrected. I like ...

Hey there, I'll give you a review. It feels like hours that she’s been running from him full pelt through the forest and she still hasn’t caught a glimpse of ...

My new years resolutions! :D 2 of which i've already broken. 1) Keep my room 'tidy' not 'cosy...' 2) Eat less junk food and exercise more. 3) Become more confident ...

Hey calligraphy, it's nice to meet you! :) Do you swim for a team? or just for fun? I'm working on a story at the moment, although i haven't given ...

Hi everyone, My names crazyhippo, and I joined this site because I've always enjoyed writing stories etc. but never been motivated enough to finish them. :x I hope to have ...

Wow! The opening was very good, and the way you moved from scene to scene so easily had me really hooked, great stuff, i'll definately be following!