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Not much I can say about this. A very well written piece, all gramatically correct and I can't see any mistakes in terms of spelling. The mood you've created is ...

Thank you very much for the thorough review :D Chapter 5 and 6 are nearly ready for submission.

Hello everyone :) It's been a while since I last posted anything on my novel, but I've managed to continue writing, and here is chapter 4! As per usual, all ...

Hi there! I hurried to pull on some black jeans and a dark sweater. Alan was waiting for me impatiently, and I had to move quickly. Adrenaline flowed through me ...

Hey everyone. I've been quite busy recently with exams and all that, but i've managed to find some time to work on the third chapter of my novel - Minos ...

Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you liked it, and I'll be looking to fix the little errors that you have pointed out! :)

Hi there again. I'll review this chapter for you. Firstly, may I say that I love the image you've created for the title, it looks great. Anyway on to the ...

I had abit of trouble writing this chapter, I just couldn't seem to get flowing today, so all reviews/comments etc. are all very welcome, I want to improve this alot. ...

No problem. And thanks for reviewing my novel too! :D

Thanks for your thoughts HMASNameless. I do indeed need to work on my vocabulary abit, and I hope to be able to improve that side of it as I progress ...

Hi there. majestic palaces built of leather and strung up by rope, now was slowly burning to the ground. Once beautiful gardens surrounded by thousands upon thousands of tents now ...

Hey! I'll do you a review... Now, that is when and how they got there main powers, well most of the children, all but one of them, Reana, Reana was ...

Thanks for the review ElementalBlood, I can see what you mean by the repetative wording, I'll take a look at that. Also, the end of the chapter was quite difficult ...

Hey, This is my first real try at writing a novel, so please, any feedback or reviews I would be very gratefull. Please tell me what you think ---------------------------------------------------------

I found the description of the suffering and pain your character experienced very interesting and it is very well written, it feels as if you are there in the room ...