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Hi there. So anyway, I have to write a french essay for a GCSE exam in about 2 weeks time, and only now have our teachers told us what it's ...

Thanks for sharing another chapter of your novel. Your plot is very well told, the characters are again well expressed, and the story has a real flow to it. I ...

The y lived in a small, dingy room and most people would wrinkle their noses, but to the boys, this was home. Apart from on little spelling mistake, this was ...

Hey there! Sorry about my slowness in replying - I've been a bit busy lately. Anyway, I said that sometimes your writing can be a little bland, and what I ...

Hi there, time for another review! Unlikely Visitors The sun gradually materialized behind the horizon. The last stars faded away, shunned by the powerful beams of summer. Darkness slowly receded, ...

Hey there, Time for a review for you! The pale goddess of the night cast her soft blue rays on the canopy of the woodland. A cool zephyr blew through ...

Thanks for your thoughts. It's clear now that this needs quite abit of work, but thanks to your comments I'm really up for tackling this challenge. Thanks :D

Thanks again for the comments. I'll definately look into rereading and rewriting these chapters. I must admit, rereading them myself, they do seem abit flat and lacking character. Thanks

No worries walker, i completely understand. Thanks for all the hints and critisism, i really want to make this novel the best it can be, so every helop is greatly ...

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Aaah! massive long review! Bit seriously, thank you so much Dreamwalker, I appreciate every bit of feedback I can get on my work. Thanks for pointing out quite a few ...

Hey dreamwalker, would you mind reviewing this chapter in my novel? I appreciate that its chapter 5, so it might not make that much sense to you, but any kind ...

Welcome to YWS!! I hope you enjoy your stay, and have fun. I've only been a member here a few months myself, but already I've found it to be full ...

Another chapter in my novel. I've been having quite a bit of trouble lately - I originally planned out my entire novel beforehand, yet as I've gone through writing it, ...

Hey There! Having read chapter 1 of this, I was eager to read on, already this has developed into a really interesting plot. So, to do a bit of nitpicking: ...