crazy_lil_blondie

Hey guys! Soory I haven't replied earlier, but school just started here and things have been insane! I just wanted to thank all of you for your comments and tips; ...

Eternal Love “Tommy…” As the clouds broke in the gray November sky, a teenager girl found herself kneeling in front of a gravestone at the town cemetery. It had taken ...

Thank you! I was wondering, where would I post it if I wanted to post it as prose, then? That's the main reason I posted it in poems. I wasn't ...

One of my rare attempts at poetry. Please review, I would like to improve upon! =] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It’s odd, this feeling of disattachment. To know that you are supposed to ...

I like this. The message is simple yet so true for society today. There is one thing that's bothering me though, and that is the rhyming scheme. Or lack there ...

I just have to say....Wow. I LOVED it! I think the choppy sentences fit well with this story, because I know from experience that when you have a MAJOR crush ...

I liked the plot, and the pretense of the story. However. [there's always one! :P] The thing that threw me off several times was that you switch tenses in the ...

I COMPLETELY agree. The only thing for me is when authors use said by itself, with nothing else to describe the emotion behind the words. And sometimes, I think that ...

"What do you mean I'm going to... be.... LATE?" he said after looking at his clock. "Oh crap! Not again! They're going to kill me!"he moaned. Quickly grabbing his clothes ...

Sooo.... Hello. My name is...Belle. [we'll go with that]. Yes, I am crazy *and* blonde [which is odd, cause no one ever associates craziness with blonde... :roll: ]. I like ...