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Re: Spring Serenade
I really like this, it's short and sweet. You captured the imagery of Spring beautifully, so bravo!
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: I'm Strong Enough
Wow, this is amazing. It really got me thinking and I was easily able to make connections with my life and friends. I really have nothing to say other than ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: I'm New!!
Hi everyone, Obviously, I am new to YWS, and I would love to receive any advice about writing. I am so excited to post some of my work and to ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: First Kissess and Innocent Wishes
I really loved this poem and even though it was short, you really got the point through. You are a really talented writer. Keep writing!
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Procrastination, Old Friend of Mine.
I really loved this because I think everyone can connect with the topic. You really grasped the topic and extended it to make us think more about procrastination. Just be ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Inner Allure
I really enjoyed this, the description were spot on and created a vivid image in my head. As for mistakes, watch your grammar and edit carefully. Don't just throw words ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Life She Wanted
Thank you for your reviews. They really made me think about my poem and writing style. I am definitely going to take all of your advice into consideration.
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Life She Wanted
She wanted to live in peace and tranquility Where sunshine existed every day. Instead she lived in fear and invisibility Where she was sent in shame under a sky of ...
Nov 29, 2011
