crazedasian1

Thank you everyone for the positive feedback on my poem! ohhellothere Punctuation in poems has always been difficult for me, but thank you for the help. I know I'm going ...

I want that kiss The one with the crescendo. That happens at the end of movies Where did it go? People are making out, Before the intro. I want true ...

Since, the other reviewers before me corrected your grammar and tone of your poem, I really have no other advice to give you besides the line " I don't know ...

First off, this was purely amazing. The emotion drips from your words and the imagery really captivated me. Wonderful job! The only advice I could offer is for this stanza,instead ...

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First, let me say, welcome. This site will help you with your writing tremendously and you'll have a great time writing and reading on here. I also love to write ...

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I really really enjoyed reading this. I especially love the format you wrote it in. It catches the eye and makes the poem more enjoyable and fun.

WOW, this was just plain fantastic. I can really feel the pain in this poem. The only thing is maybe you may want to elaborate on a few lines. But, ...

I have already read this twice, if that tells you anything. So powerful and so strong! I love it.

Silence is golden; she should be rich Too lame to meet; to unknown to ditch She’s so outdated, a waste of space She’s the nerdy girl with blackheads on her ...

Very comical, made me laugh out loud (which is hard to do) Good Job!

Wow, this is beautiful!I could really feel the emotion from your words. Just be careful with your punctuation. I am not sure if you like to put periods at the ...