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I liked the fact that you did it that what, but I love it the way it is. I think you did amazing on it. It was short sweet and ...

I thought that all three were absolutely amazing, and there's nothing I would improve. Granted that's just my opinion, but.. Oh well. (: It's an opinion, it's just that, so ...

Thank you. :) Sincerely, Ciara

Haha. I mostly have the stuckness or the two many at once kinda thing. I'm very spontaneous about my writing. Sincerely, Ciara

Thank you. I i have picked over a little since I put it on here. I'll put the revised version on once I get on a computer and off my ...

I agree with everyone. It sent a very strong message and I think that it was well done. You're an amazing writer even when it was late at night, but ...

I absolutely adore it! I think it flowed very well and it was short but sweet. Nicely done, I have no more comments for this other than that it was ...

Oh God, I’m down on my knees. I’m begging please guide my way, let me know the words to say. Help me see, the person you want me to be. ...

Yeah, it's all up to you. If you like to rhyme, by golly, RHYME! If you don't, then don't. I really liked this poem, but "When I tore my lips ...

Sorry, If I seemed mean. I don't mean to be. I was just being honest. Like I said on your other post, Don't let me get to you. (: Sincerely, ...

I like the idea of it, but the format throws me off. The answer to the first question, I think you should find a different word for measurement, but that's ...

I think it's fabulous, the rhymes fit perfectly, and it flowed very well. I think you captured the sound of a clock to the "T". You did, however, have a ...

I aboslutely love it! And not just because it's about elephants. It flowed very nicely and the rhymes were perfect. I thought that it was an amazing poem. You showed ...

I really liked it, but to me it seemed choppy. I'm could be all the commas, idk, maybe I'm just weird. Sincerely, Ciara