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Re: I need help with this one.
I added another paragraph and got rid of that part I just added. Hear my cree, listen to me, I'm not the person- I seem to be. Look in my ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Bloodmarked
Whoa, I absolutely loved it. It drew me in and definetely kept my attention. Which is kinda hard to do. haha. I don't have a very high attention span. I ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: You Drove Me Insane
Holy friggin' cow! That was the best poem I've read in awhile. I couldn't wait for more. The whole time I was intrigued. Your words fit perfectly with your emotion ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: I need help with this one.
I added another paragraph and got rid of that part I just added. Hear my cree, listen to me, I'm not the person- I seem to be. Look in my ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Nine-O-Clock at Night.
I thought it was great. Fantastic. Amazing. I'm out of words! I loved it. :) Keep writing cause you're pretty awesome. Sincerely, Ciara
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Too Young To Understand
I love it, and I generally would rather a poem to rhyme. But yours flowed perfectly that I loved it. Keep writing because you're talented! I'd love to hear more ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Mr.Hyde and I
Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved it and thought that it was fantastic. It gave me chills man. It was short and sweet and to the point, just what I ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: I need help with this one.
I scream and shout, these chains wont slip? Does that sound good? by the way, thanks for the help.
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Scars.
Dude. I absolutely loved it. I love the chill it sent. It was fantastic. I have no corrections, I didn't see where they could be any. Awesome job, keep it ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: The lies we tell ourselves
Oh my gosh, that is one of the best poems I've read on here. I think it was great and it left me speechless. I have nothing to correct you ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Our future
I think it's great. Took me a little while to catch on. I'm a little slow at times, haha. But I loved it. Keep writing, because you got talent man. ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: I Want To Tell You
Hi cap'n! :) Name's Ciara. I thought you're poem was excellent, and I loved it because it's something everyone goes through and I can relate to it. Other than a ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Homesick
I agree, I really like the poem, but you do need more punctuation. Other than that I really have no complaints. Keep writing, You're very talented. Sincerely, Ciara
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: I need help with this one.
Hear my cree, listen to me, I'm not the person- I seem to be. Look in my eyes, Don't say goodbye, learn the truth- behind the lies. Read my lips, ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: New girl on the block!
Thank you. (: I'm sure we can, haha.
Nov 9, 2011