craftywriter

I love Warrior Fanoff's! Yours is a great one.

i really like your story. When they approach the kit, however, is where it gets foggy. Why do they think she is redpaw? How did she get into camp? Could ...

i really like where your going with this story. i think you should put in some more details about the setting and more about Yellowfoot. Also maybe you should put ...

I think you should DEFINITLEY keep going! And please make Nessie a strong charecter that's one of the things i didn't like about the twilight saga. How weak Bella was.

I'm not apart of the twilight fan craze but I gotta admit i love your totally unperdictable version!!! Keep going!!!

Definitley a good first piece. You probaly have had enough banter with the appreviatons but their right!! The same people advised me to and it helped. Alot. Please come out ...

I have a strong dislike for pesssism too!!!. My first poem I posted ( the only thing I have posted!) I got busted for use of juvinille and simple words. ...

Name: Kevin Age: Maybe 20? Gender: Male apperance: I'd rather describe. Short and spikey blond hair. Also has deep brown eyes,freckles, and a medium nose. Weaknesses: Works too hard and ...

YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!! For most of the story I couldn't even tell it was written by a 14 year-old! That means grammer was great, creativeness was suberb, and ...

Thanks for your opions guys! I really appreciate it. The poem was oringinally longer and "meatier" but I lost the paper it was on :(! I will definitley try your ...

Hey AMU this is craftywriter.We chatted together? Anyway, your piece totally captivated me. You seriosly need to write more. It's really clever plot line you just need to expand it ...

Fall The leaf falls to the ground Falling... Falling... Crunching under my feet Crunch, Crunch ,Crunch My sister jumps in I laugh, then follow Kicking up leaves Beneath a blue ...