coy_soni

hello! i liked your poem. i think it aptly conveys the impulsiveness and feelings that you wanted it too. but personally speaking, i always like poems to more rich in ...

I wish could dive in the black sea(sky), with little studded stars around; I wish could play with em' o Thee!! n bring the moon on earthy grounds. I wish ...

i really liked it :wink:...good goin...

I liked the idea of this, but I think there were too many dots......too many exclamation marks and question marks, and too many capitals at the end. Writing should be ...

when things turn negative.. when mood turns low.. i often think of those around me.. one by one.. but couldn't recollect even one, whom i can share my loneliness with... ...