cosmonaut

I admire that you weren't scared to experiment in the creation of this poem, but I'm not entirely sure that the use of second person was working for me. I ...

I enjoyed the actual content and the language used in this poem, but my only problem was capitalisation. Yep. It may sound like I'm nit picking, but unless the capitalisation ...

This was a very powerful piece with a good use of structure and emotive language. I really enjoyed it and I like the use of lower case. As well as ...

Personally, I loved the use of repetition in this piece. I found this piece of work flowed very well and was very effective in conveying its message and it was ...