cosmonaut

I admire that you weren't scared to experiment in the creation of this poem, but I'm not entirely sure that the use of second person was working for me. I ...

I enjoyed the actual content and the language used in this poem, but my only problem was capitalisation. Yep. It may sound like I'm nit picking, but unless the capitalisation ...

I think that names are very important. It is vital to choose a believable name for your character depending on their gender, the time/dimension/setting of the story and the ethnicity ...

I love reading post-1914 poets a lot. Currently, my two favourite poems are: A Radio with Guts by Charles Bukowski it was on the 2nd floor on Coronado Street I ...

In writing poetry so that it doesn't sound emo, I take the Bukowski philosophy: don't try. I think emo poetry is when the writer has overused metaphors to try and ...

This was a very powerful piece with a good use of structure and emotive language. I really enjoyed it and I like the use of lower case. As well as ...

Personally, I loved the use of repetition in this piece. I found this piece of work flowed very well and was very effective in conveying its message and it was ...