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Thank you! I hadn't realized that 'the Shadow' had been used in another book, but I'll use my brain to think up a new name. Did you know that there ...

Thank you for reviewing! I've taken a quick look over, but I'm going to bed now, so I'll read it again in the morning. Once again, thank you!

Thank you! I'll pay attention to that!

Thank you!

Just done some small edits, nothing big as I believe in completing, then going over it all again.

Thank you! I'll have a go at working on the few things that you pointed out, and I'll definitely proof read it! Thank you for explaining the difference between Your ...

Thanx for the review! Well, I prefer to keep thoughts in italics because sometimes I get mixed up with speech and thought, though thanks for the opinion! Also, I can ...

Yay! Thank you!

Hey, thanks! Will take a longer to the edits than I thought because I am doing my story Dark Tide at the same time.

I've posted Chapter Two up now. To see it click the Click To See Possible Related Items button on the top left of the page.

Yay! Thank you! I'll set to work about the bits that you have pointed out!

Nope you haven't been to harsh! Bring it on... I'll set about fixing those problems, and once I've done I'll re-post it. Thanx for reviewing!

Thanx! I can't believe I couldn't see the "moths" spelling mistake. I've gone over it loads of times!