coryab222

That was really great. I loved the passion and longing you put into it. It sounded very professional - as a poem goes - and was well put together.

Thank you all for the wonderful reviews! I am in the process of changing it.

This was wonderful. I loved it. I could not stop reading. I am curious about whether he is a real ghost or whether he is more metaphorical, though... perhaps that ...

Alright, everyone... I got some great reviews on this piece, and I wanted to make it better! I have edited it from its original version here. The review from Saint ...

It was simple and short, but it was striking. I love the contrast between "night" and "blazing by." The only improvement is that it could be longer.

That was very good. I have not read your first poem, but this seems to be working for you. There is great imagery, but some of the word usage was ...

I really liked the idea for that poem. It definitely showed the business of going insane! It was very simple, so it had very little depth to it. It would ...

Wow. That definitely let your opinion show. The beginning was rather difficult to follow as the words did not flow as smoothly as they have the potential to. Once I ...

Hi, my name is Cory - I'm a girl with a guy's name. I discovered YWS while looking for a place to post some of my fiction short stories online. ...