coryab222

This was really good. There was great expression of emotion. I loved the first and last stanzas - I felt like those showed me more of what the poem was ...

Why wouldn't Hilary being attacked not be on the news? If a presidential candidate was threatened in any way, we should know about it.

I thought this was nice and romantic. Though the content was good, I felt like the title did not fit the poem. The lines when you say "Like riding the ...

The theme of this was great. I felt the old man was a great character for this, but I would consider expanding more on who he really was. Was he ...

How is this working? What are the dates? I would love to be part of the audience.

I am one hundred percent pro-Obama. His belief that America is in need of a drastic, yet realistic change is exactly what I have been believing for many years. Hilary ...

That was pretty good. I liked how it had a lot of emphasis on how the subject is feeling. The only problem was that it was so straight forward that ...

That was sad, and yet very uplifting. It was great how it ended in acceptance and love. The contrast between the fear from the dream and the memories shared was ...

I'm not sure I really understood it. What you were trying to say was not all that clear. Was there someone to help her? Was there "someone" to help her? ...

It started out flowing very well, but I felt no connection with the musician or the person in love with the musician. There really weren't strong reasons for why the ...

You pulled that off very nicely. It was such a funny idea! I really did not understand what was going on until the very end, though. Perhaps you could weave ...

That was very nice. The connection between the character's heart and her fathers stained shirt was really a good choice. What would make it even better is if you could ...

I thought that was a great poem. I loved how you did not tell the reader exactly what was being written on the page or what sin was about to ...

That was such a fun poem! I actually really loved the randomness of it. It was a very original idea, and the topics within it were nicely chosen. Some where ...

That was really fun to read. It had a good rhythm to it, but it was not very original compared to others. To make it really stand out and be ...