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coryab222

  • Lounge, The Re: Juno

    Juno is a personal favorite movie of mine. It's great!

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Blood and Chocolate

    I completely agree with Tessitore. I read the book, loved it, ran to the movie store, watched the movie, hated it. I was exceptionally disappointed. It was hardly the same ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Do any make you nauseous?

    For me, it is Schindler's List . It also makes me cry every time.

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Flowers on Grave

    This had wonderful emotion. There were only sagging willows that fell from the clouds that enveloped me; I think this should be "... clouds enveloping me;" only the damp smell ...

    Jun 9, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Get back on the horse

    This was great! Very optimistic and hopeful. My favorite part of it was that you used and played off of well known phrases such as "the bark is worse than ...

    Jun 5, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Reviewing Challenge

    Right now I have 31 reviews. My goal is to reach 75 reviews by July 7th. Thats one more gold star.

    Jun 5, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Critique the Person Above You!

    Jun 5, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Flemzo's Exhilarating Monotony Contest: Breakfast

    This was great! I loved how you made something so simple so complicated and excited! Awesome work. It definitely deserves the place it got! Awesome!

    Jun 5, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: I Know

    I think this is something you should work on developing this more. Even though it was and assignment, it has the potential to become a real and engaging poem. Develop ...

    Jun 5, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: A still life in color

    For some positive feedback, I really liked this. I liked the wonder it possessed and the way it allowed me to picture the scenery and culture of Jerusalem. I really ...

    Jun 5, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Reason for Rebellion

    hey, good job. I liked this a lot. I would suggest adding another line to the last stanza, though. It seemed incomplete and did not follow the pattern of the ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Can It Be?

    So this wasn't much of a piece for character development, but it you did well with expressing feelings. Sady's anxiety and feelings towards Alan were nicely expressed, but I really ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Fate Calling

    Very good. I thought it was written very nicely and descriptively. I was able to picture Alice sitting there in her button-up red cotton dress impatiently waiting for Jasper. So ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Fate Calling

    Very good. I thought it was written very nicely and descriptively. I was able to picture Alice sitting there in her button-up red cotton dress impatiently waiting for Jasper. So ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Seraphim and Serpents.

    Alright, so not bad. I thought you did a nice job of showing the relationship between Snape and Lily - both the relationship they had as friends when they were ...

    Jun 4, 2008


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