coryab222

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Good... but here comes the harder feedback. Initially, the picture you give the reader by describing the Phantom Mist as tall and mighty does not give us the sense of ...

Writerlover - You get points by reviewing pieces. At the top of the page, there is a section labeled "Writing." "Read and Review" is the section you want to look ...

For those of you that know, Stephanie Meyer, the author of the Twilight saga, has been writing another version of Twilight from Edward's perspective called Midnight Sun. Well, she got ...

Whoo! This is, by far, the best of the series yet. You did an awesome job with adding that twist at the end. The only thing I don't absolutely love ...

This is still going very well! I agree with BBB about the opening of those two paragraphs, but I also noticed it in this paragraph, too: "Upon entering the room, ...

Good, good. This is good! Please write more of it soon. I'm really excited to know who "he" is... so suspenseful.

Hey. I'm not going to point out the grammar mistakes, because everyone else has already done that, so just double check all that. Well, I didn't feel like this one ...

All right. Review time. This was really good. I am honestly going to read the second and third one right after this. You got me hooked. You did awesome with ...

Alright, this was decent. First a grammar mistake, though... "However, this was no t just any figure." I thought this sentence kind of killed the feel of the rest of ...

Alright! Currently number 61!

This was great. It really made me feel horrible for the main character. You did a great job with showing relationships. Read through it once aloud on your own, though. ...

This is good so far. You are doing a great job of describing the setting and such. I would suggest reading it aloud to yourself to catch any awkward or ...

Good job! Great job at letting us get to know the character. Honestly, my favorite line was "Joseph has shit tickets for a tail!" Cannot wait for the next chapter.

What is this?!? This should to be rewritten completely. Your grammar needs tremendous work - you especially need to capitalize and add commas - and take out the smileys. This ...