cormacquinn

Its different how it has a opposite perspective from the biblical story. It percieves more logic, of course she would be angry . Its short but cunning...i like it a ...

Pretty Good. It obviously has a resounding message that can be felt and understood. One of the few poems you can read and get the message of without reading it ...

Overall I really liked this piece. There were some great and ingenious lines. Thats what I truly admire in a writer. I mean I only saw a couple of faults ...