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Re: Broken Apart
Your face of an angel Is right there when I need it I think you know how I feel But I won't tell you yet Everyone knows that we're best ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: The New Guy
More that expected, you're really a nice guy. I like the way you talk to me, the way you say goodbye. Hey, Bailey. I think that this stanza could go ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: past ( working on the title)
Hey... language problem!!! I can't believe you! You never said that you would put it in there. But hey, I guess that's high school. Speaking of language, I think you ...
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
Yeah, I think that's a really good idea. I was just writing it from memory, so I was really surprised there wasn't more than that wrong! Thanks again.
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
Perfection Everybody thinks I'm perfect But I know I'm not And when everyone starts to find out about me I suddenly feel as if they forgot Exactly what I'm like ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Hopeless
Hey, Abby. Good job for your first poem. It was really good except for a couple mistakes but someone else has already pointed those out so once again good job.
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Hide me...
That is so insightful and beautiful. I love it so much. You'll have to check out one of my stories sometime. Good luck with the rest of your writing
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Poetry Fight
That was so funny, and Cat's right. It can be very true sometimes. :D
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Never Again
Never Again Never Again will she go on walks with me. Never Again will she escort me to the car on my way to school. I Never Again will be ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Titleless story
Oh my goodness! That was so cool. I loved it!!!!
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
yo Cat, that was so good. I can't wait to read the rest. see you at school tomorrow
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Kay and the Magic Kingdom Keepers
Hi. I’m Kayanna, but just call me Kay. I’ve been planning my parents’ second honeymoon for months. They were going on a cruise to the Carribean on the Costa Medi-something. ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: I l-o-v-e y-o-u {EDITED}
That is such a sweet story!! I wish life was always that perfect!!!!!
Nov 2, 2008
