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You are so talented! I love the raindrops one, and the swan:) I also liked the batteries, just because I never thought that a picture of batteries could be so ...

I see the "you can please god" thing. Very well written:) I really enjoyed it!

very, very good. So dramatic:) I am enjoying reading the poetry on this website, and this is one of my favorites:) Good job:)

So, is the narrator homeless. Is the mother dead? That's what I got from it. Am I right? That was really good:) You are talented:)

Try giving your characters more emotion. The readers have to feel what they are feeling. If your character is sad, the readers should feel sad too. If he is happy, ...

These lyrics are really good! I've always wished I could write a song, but I just don't have the inspiration. You are very talented, though:)

That was awesome! You really drew me in tot he story. I could Imagine everything clearly in my mind. I noticed a few little mistakes, though. I won't mention them ...

I really like this poem. I like the way you described everything, it really drew me in. Reading this, I can imagine what is happening, and I can see the ...

awesome! you're a very good writer. keep it up!

Awesome! I love the way you write, it's really captivating:) Keep up the good work

This is really good:) Keep up the good work!

this is really good:) I wish I was able to write poetry....Anyway, keep up the good work!!

Chapter 1 "Quinn! Oh my gosh, Quinn! Guess what! Liam asked me to the prom! I know it's three months away or whatever, but still!" Brooke exclaimed while setting her ...