coolperson321

Thank you! I know it is not that original, but it was the first thing that inspired me. I read somewhere that when you're younger, you tend to write about ...

I like this poem because it is true. There are some things in life we will just never understand. Is that what the poem was about because that's what I ...

Hi everyone! My names is Brittany. I love writing, so I joined this website to get critiqued, and to become a better writer. I would appreciate it if you checked ...

Aww...that's sad. The story I mean, not your writing! You are an awesome writer. You're good with descriptions, and I was able to imagine the scene clearly. I would say ...

I really enjoyed this! I think you should definitely turn it into a novel. It is definitely something I would read. I won't nitpick because I suck at it, so ...

awesome, awesome! I have read your other poetry too, and you are really good:)

I'm not very good at critiquing poetry, so I won't try. You are amazing at writing though. I really enjoyed this poem. Keep up the good work!!

I didn't see any mistakes, so good job:) Beautifully written, I could imagine everything perfectly. Keep on writing.

Amazing! You will go far for sure. Good job:)

Very good poem! You have talent. I don't really see any mistakes, so good job!

Chapter 1 Quinn “Don’t be nervous, honey. Everything will be fine.” My mom said soothingly. “I know, Mom. I’m not nervous. I just…I just don’t really know what to expect.” ...

aww, im sure it was nice. its jut deleted now....

the last 2 were nice, but the first one was just gorgeous! It really is:) I love how the ring is on the paper, and there is some color! you ...

wow! these are all awesome! i love your style:)

you are such a great artist!