cooldude19967

Very nice! Your portrayal of the grim reaper was great! I'm a bit curious about his boss, but assume that will be cleared up more as this goes on. Keep ...

Thanks a lot for your imput. It's especially nice to get seeing as your doing the same kind of thing. I never really though of keeping ties to the orgional ...

I like your writing, the suspense was very good, but I found your use of all of a sudden ruined the feeling you were going for. It was like hitting ...