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This is it! Awesome! I have the votes! I have the play! I have the main role! I have nerves like you wouldn't believe! Whoot! I'm estatic!

Huh, it's interesting to see others points of view about this. For one, I would have never seen about half the things you are saying. To be honest, I don't ...

Thanks Springrain! I appreciate the praise!

I'm rather new at writing, it's only interested me other than school work since this September, so I'm afraid I don't know what you mean by a "descriptive piece". I ...

Bravo, much better! And your first time around wasn't shabby either! I've kept my review in the same document as before, mostly so that I wouldn't go over it and ...

Thanks so much for your advice 299397. It looked very usefull and I will definetly apply a good bit of it. One question, exactly how did the first bit that ...

Thanks for ther high praise! It's always nice to hear that along with things to fix. As for Being acted out... they said we'd vote today, but it was put ...

Thanks all of you for your review. Anti-pop I really appreciate the depth you put into this, it helped a lot. I think I agree with you an the watch ...

Thanks a lot Krupp, I agree it's annoying to see something with no reviews, especially when your on the receiving end. But I can also see why people wouldn't want ...

Well, glad I could help!

Show don't tell... show don't tell... The best way to describe it is to show you. (oops, I did not mean that!) This's what I'll do, I'll take a couple ...

Thanks! I am going to edit this, and I'll definetly take what you said into consideration. It's sort of weird how most of my writing comes out dark, because I'm ...

Thanks a lot Springrain! Those were defietly mistakes, I don't know how I missed them while I was editing... thanks for pointing them out.

Thanks for the response, sorry it took so long for me to get back to you, but I'm back now! I tried to make Puck's accent as extreme as I ...

I'm trying to, that's what the time limit was for. But ignore the deadline. Thanks for the advice with the cut offs, I didn't know that.