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I think the top and the bottom drag on for too long. I would suggest cropping it a little on the top and a little more on the bottom, right ...

So adorable. I would say that every picture is perfect except the last one. The atmosphere just seems to change in that one, but these really are lovely.

Your rhyming scheme is all over the place and at times it seems forced. As well as that, the poem was sweet, but flooded with cliches. Our love shine's shines ...

Justin Beiber: 46. Twilight: 49. (-1) Harry Potter: 52. (+1) Miley Cyrus: 49. Hunger Games: 50. Vampire Diaries: 50. YWS: 51. Pretty Little Liars: 51. X-Men: 50. Books: 50. Pigs: ...

“Why are you following me?” she asked (comma) turning. “Yes I do. It’s just not finished yet. (comma) ” s he retorted (period) “You know perfectly well that I meant ...

A lot of novel don't get many reviews. Usually it's a few on the first chapter, maybe one on the second, but none from that point on. So, if you're ...

Heaving heavily in, my mind swirled with random thoughts. Quite a weak first sentence, not to mention it's awkwardly written. "Heaving heavily in" should be reworded, it just isn't working ...

I've had this bookmarked and labelled "REVIEW THIS" for days now, sorry for the procrastination. I spilled a few painkillers down the back of my sticky tongue then took the ...

Good evening. A review on this would be lovely: No rush, whenever you have the time. Thanks!

I could never do it, but I respect vegetarians. I'm not a fan of vegans, I don't completely understand that, but what business is it of mine, right? **Read some ...

Just something I wrote for the heck of it. I find poetry is actually quite relaxing. So review it, tell me what you think, give me some tips so I ...

This is such a fantastic idea, I really love it. BUT, I feel you came up short. I think it would have more effect if the toys were classic, like ...

I feel like the glasses ruined the first picture, but I know that they were just for fun, and I'm sure you still have the first picture without them saved. ...

The 3 is a little cut off, I don't know if YWS did that when you uploaded it or if it's just like that, just thought I'd point it out, ...

The 3 is a little cut off, I don't know if YWS did that when you uploaded it or if it's just like that, just thought I'd point it out, ...