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I'm sorry that it's taken so long for me to get to this! I've been real busy lately, but I'm here now. I was wondering though, this must not be ...

"Oh no! I'm so late!", I yelped as I frantically rushed to put on my new low-ankle beige coloured socks. Trust me when I say, we don't care about what ...

I like this, really, but I feel that the rhyming ruined it. As soon as I got to the last line of the first stanza, I stopped taking this poem ...

8/10. I chuckled

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The first thing I noticed was that you're changing tenses quite a bit. Perhaps today will be the day. vs. I trudged my way into the band room. The first ...

I'm indifferent to it. I mean, good for them for doing something to raise awareness, but ehhh... I mean, I don't see the huge problem. No matter how much money ...

They're all really amazing, but I'm not feeling the last one. It's blurry and it doesn't have anything interesting to focus on. Aside from that, these look very professional, nice ...

Pavo wasn’t all that surprised when he woke up. However, he was absolutely puzzled as to the fact that he was still alive. These two sentences contradict each other. I ...

I think this story of your is definitely the best thing featured right now. Don't tell anyone I said that. Benji caught a bird yesterday. Someone once told me dogs ...

I read a couple chapters last night, but I was too tired to review them. The immediate thing I noticed is how fast the story is moving now. It had ...

Good evening. While reading this, I realized that there was nothing to nitpick - honestly, nothing. Which is crazy because I can usually find a nitpick in anyone's writing. So, ...

I was going to go to sleep, but I saw this and I couldn't resist. Some nitpicks first, I suppose. I tell you (comma) that son of mine was the ...

Dive right on in - no regrets. Besides, no one's first review is anything superb. AND, welcome! I hope you enjoy it here.

This is solid work, which makes my job difficult. It's clear to me that you've gone over this many times because I didn't find much to pick at. For that ...