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Here, as promised. The nightmare was simple, but complex in its own way Eh.. don't contradict yourself here. Either it's simple or it's complex. I get what you're trying to ...

I'll admit, I was reading this, thinking about how cliche it was beginning to sound. But then I got to the end and I changed my mind. I'm actually looking ...

When Aiden dropped a trio of plates on the floor, - the ceramic exploding into a million broken pieces, embedding into Aiden's foot like shrapnel from a bomb - Nina ...

It ended with a funeral. Good opening line. Simply, straight-forward, defining. I like the idea of the repetitive beginnings to the opening paragraphs - "There was", but the phrasing itself ...

I shall start reviewing those ASAP! *EDIT: volleyball13 - done Jas - done everyone else - in progress

A Child Called It, definitely. It's supposed to be real (who knows how true it really is), but the thought of that stuff being true makes my skin crawl.

I liked the beginning bit right off the bat. It was interesting and free from ranting. Your story feels like it's getting better and better with each passing chapter. was ...

Sounds wonderful, I can't wait

Might I just say, that I find it much too hard to find my own stories on here, which is something I feel I have to do because I never ...

Eh it was alright, kind of just waided through it. Felt borderline too descriptive. *all right. Sorry, just had to correct you! Alright isn't accepted like altogether is. *It felt ...

Hello m'dear, I finally got free time, and so here I am. Nitpicks first. I took a deep breath, and had a coughing fit that very second Awkwardly phrased It ...

Payne - done polinkacreations - in progress

Hola. I'd love a review on this. If you don't mind, I'd rather it be more of an 'umbrella view' than nitpicks. I usually don't have too many grammar errors, ...

I was wondering if you could take a look at this. It hasn't really gotten any attention which is pretty disappointing, so I figured I'd venture over here. Only when ...

Drops of Acid It isn’t a problem. I can stop anytime I want. This habit doesn’t have a cent’s worth of control over me. I’m the driver of this so-called ...