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Re: Ode to Harry Potter
two words: Bloody Brilliant!
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: The War of the Swans: Chapter One: Bird Song
“As we’ve said before Miss,” said the shorter yet bulkier of the two guards with a heavy sigh, “your uncle, the King James, has not given detail as to why ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: The War of the Swans: Author's Note
This interests me, but the fact that your characters have the same names as the Twilight characters is a bit of a turn-off. I feel like a lot of people ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: White flag
i physically not fight anymore. This line is sort of confusing. "Physically, I do not fight anymore" might make more sense, if that was what you were going for. amoungst ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: The Yellow Sheets
When I get home it’s gotten worse. Specks of dried blood cover the edges of her nostrils, rubbed raw from the constant presence of the handkerchiefs that lay balled up ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
A Highway To Hell (ACDC) But what did we do there?
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: The Fairer Side of the Sunset
Wow. Seriously, wow. Nothing has made me go from laughing as much as I was, to almost losing it and crying all over my keyboard. This was touching, or at ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (Twitterized)
HARRY_P Voldemort aint got nothing on me ______________________________________________________________________________ HARRY_P Hello twitter, I'll be tweeting to you from a cupboard under the stairs.
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Gone
(150 words) It was hard to see my father lying the way he was in his hospital bed. Defenseless. The nurse had told me it would only be a matter ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: The Silence of Laughter
This is so incredibly lovely. I don't really have anything else to say, ahaha, sorry! I just really loved this.
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Best Friends
Best friends- The ones that you can only be mad for an hour because you have important stuff to tell them Best Friends- Only make you cry from laughing to ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Tremolo
The first paragraph for this story did a really good job of sucking me in, props for that. Who can't resist a great beginning? It was Casey’s idea to start ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: The Mermaids Song
After setting sail from Barbados on one of my father's insane hunts for treasure and feeling the salty wind in my hair, Adding the "and feeling the salty wind in ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: My Father
This is so wonderful in every way. The beginning caught my attention pretty much instantly! I love how you used a subject that really means something to you, and I ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
HARRY_P I make the witches holla _______________________________________________________________________________ HARRY_P @Dobby Thanks a lot for dropping that cake on my uncle’s boss… 29 Jul _____
Jul 27, 2011
