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“What the hell is going on?” I whisper-yelled at him. I know what you mean by whisper-yelled, but it just doesn't sound right to me. "I whispered at him" , ...

George said with authority, though he was only seven months older that than I. I did not here hear any words Mk, those were just some tiny mistakes. What I ...

I haven't read this book, but it makes me want to. I like this a lot!

In case you're confused, the years represent when the event happened, but the girl is looking back from 2002. 1988 I think my first memory of you is from when ...

This is really touching and easy to read. from your mistakes. that affect everyone else. here, you should either take away the period after 'mistakes' or replace the 'that' with ...

I only wish I could click love instead of like.

Aha, oh wow. This was really really damn good. It's captivating, and there's no doubt in my mind that I'll be reading the rest of your story. The only thing ...

There are four houses; Gryffendor, *Gryffindor Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin. The hat came down on my head with a dusty whoof, and I could almost feel the consciousness in the ...

Just one more sip , I promised myself as the burgundy liquid fire swam ( some suggestions to make this flow smoothly: "as the fiery liquid swam down my throat" ...

I love this, it's short, simple, but at the same time very complex. There's quite a bit of emotion in this piece, and unlike many poems it has a message ...

This is wonderful, so touching and so accurate. It's a very relatable poem, for the most part anyways, which is probably what makes it so captivating. It had a good, ...

Hey, Hi, Hello Yoda. I just sorta stumbled upon this today, and I was wondering if the offer is still up for grabs. You see, I have this story - ...

The little girl frowned slightly, the doll pausing as it trotted across a rock embedded in the grass. She’d heard people say that in the movies. When she’d asked her ...

Damn, this is amazing. I loved how the entire poem was a sort of metaphor. Or at least that's how I saw it. The girl is warmth, happiness, summer. She ...

This is something I wrote for the "Capture That Emotion" contest. The emotion I was given was Irritation/Annoyance, and the song I chose was: Perfect by Simple Plan. The lyrics ...