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Samantha. My name is Samantha. My name is Samantha Kendall. My name is Samantha Jane Kendall (period) With m y eyes still closed, they began repeating over and over in ...

Yes, a tad confusing, but that's alright, some writing isn't meant to make sense. As long as you know what you're talking about... (I hope you do) I nodded, struggling ...

I Can't Believe I Go Again Get t ing Hurt Get t ing Cheated On Not This Time "Getting" has two t's. Two. Hurt You Think I'll Forgive You Forgive ...

These are my two entries for IcyFlame's contest. Reviews are very welcome!

I guess this is just something I wanted to try out. I've never written something in anything other than a human's perspective. It's quite short I didn't feel like it ...

I know this is an older story, but I felt like reviewing it anyways, so I hope it helps! It was the start of the second semester of the school, ...

The only nitpick that was obvious to me was this one: It might have been the fucken hand gun, (no comma) they pointed at my head.” And the 'fucken' didn't ...

Frozen air drifted from her lips, I'm going to have to disagree with the comment above, I feel like this is a good way to describe the way you can ...

I know you're trying to get effect from the use of more punctuation than necessary, but, I personally, find it obnoxious. So this is what I will focus on in ...

I would suggest putting this in poetry.

Satana Hellstrom stood in the middle of the dance floor , dancing alone while moving her hips all over the place. Her red locks bounced with every movement she made ...

To be honest, this was sort of sweet, but it was nothing special. It's almost too simple and too repetitive. Love is pretty Love is nice Love is divine Love ...

I liked the message of the poem, you pulled that off well. The way it is written, however, could be improved. little butterfly, i found you dead I realize you're ...

Everything - Michael Buble What time is it?

A single car idled in the parking lot and , at this time of night , it was no surprise. “Cause it’s not yours.” Loved the ending, it added that ...