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I love the colours in the first picture, and just the plant in general. The second picture has got to be my favourite. It's haunting. The third is pretty, nice ...

suggestions / grammatical errors comments Not the kind of fear that made me wake up and cry, waking my parents up I would suggest changing one of the bolded words. ...

"Remember when I told you today will be special?" This is a very ungrammatical sentence. If you meant to make the person sound like that, my apologies, but if not, ...

"Rick-" Anna started to say, but Rick was too engulfed in his topic. Reads a bit awkward. Maybe try something like "but Rick ignored her" or "before Rick cut her ...

The cover was great, very magical-like. However, the spine and back cover didn't go. Imagine putting those images together and making them one, it wouldn't really work, would it? Anyways, ...

I felt the mild, comforting sunlight warming my damp body. I lay there for a few seconds more, absorbed in bliss. I opened my eyes and felt a sharp, stinging ...

I felt the mild, comforting sunlight warming my damp body. I lay there for a few seconds more, absorbed in bliss. I opened my eyes and felt a sharp, stinging ...

I felt the mild, comforting sunlight warming my damp body. I lay there for a few seconds more, absorbed in bliss. I opened my eyes and felt a sharp, stinging ...

I felt the mild, comforting sunlight warming my damp body. I lay there for a few seconds more, absorbed in bliss. I opened my eyes and felt a sharp, stinging ...

The pictures are interesting, but the choice of font, colour, size, and positioning for the title isn't very well done. In the first one: The red isn't the worst font ...

Ah alright, if you feel okay using other's ideas, do as you please.

This seems like a rip-off of this: I'm not sure if you meant to do it, but I doubt it's just a coincidence.

Shh? (period instead) Listen. That was really my only nitpick. Hm, this had a good message, and when I first began to read, I thought the 'Shh. Listen." sounded quite ...

But, my dear... I see no book cover!

blue- suggestions green- comments red- grammatical Paula called from the Kitchen. I watched the car Not sure why you capitalized kitchen. at the photographs of grand churches and those ghastly ...